Abigail’s Dragon

Last night, I reviewed Abigail’s Dragon for story content and make a list of areas I needed to adjust.

Things to do:

1. Review three fight scenes. [Fight scenes are the most difficult to capture and have be interesting. I think I managed to do well, but I think they need to be polished.]

2. Add High Tea with Harringtons scene. This will show more family support for Abigail and give the audience a bit more time to grieve with her..

2. David and Abigail scene. I think there needs to be a father/daughter scene.

3. Clara and Abigail bonding scene. This is a relationship I need to strengthen and I think I need one more scene in there.

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